I’m daydreaming that I’m back at The Patti Hut in Atlanta. When I read the piece in practice, the last street names will intersect right above me’. One of my MyFriends wants to do a poetfest in Atlanta sometime soon. And I would love to come to that.
I fretted a little about 'is' sweet and kind or 'was' sweet and kind. I finally went with 'has walked' and 'was sweet'.
I also went back and added the comma in the title.
This is linked to www.myspace.com/fenrirbound Blog post for June 11.
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